Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

https://youtu.be/uLzUlaIBkoY

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

- really good mise-en-scene

- love the jump transition

It could be better if you included more fast paced editing and a variety of shots.

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your music video.

WWW: 

Genre conventions met

good mise en scene

nice transition

EBI:

Editing pace

movement

variety of shots

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

- I did it to a good enough extent, I just needed to be a bit more inventive with the editing

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

Editing needs to be better, as do the locations because they have to be in line with my genre 

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual music video? This could include the narrative or performance element or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

- more locations

- quicker editing

- improved lighting

-more shots

- perhaps a new song?